Fait for us both

• Artist: Xx_Chimera-Rose
• Description: age: 12
  Soon after Aziwai's mothers death, her and her three friends half to reach Mount Moon lake, this mountin containes the secret that shows how Aziawi's mother died, and what is happening to there bodys.
  Most of all the ones that want to kill them are the Police like people that live on mount moon lake.
  Will they rise against the the ones that are trying to kill them both?
  Vocab:
  Doll fox: ragged pieces of clay that makes up a mask that covers the doll fox's face.
• Date: 05/08/2009
• Tags: fait both

Chapter 1
"In there?!" Kimoka squieled painfully as if i had dragged a knife down her back.
"what else can we do Kimoka? we have to!"I said sturnly.
We both had our eyes fixed on the cave, it was pitch black and we both where starveing and cold.
"NOOO I WON'T AZIAWI!" she yelled in her highest voice.
"Kimoka, listen we have too!"
"NOOOOO!"
I glanced around the forest.
There where three big hills with jagged peaks, and trees as talls as mountins pearched on top.
My eyes trailed back to the cave.
"Aziwai....i won't."
"I will then ok ?"
"noo."
I stepped foward the thick grass brushing my my knee's.
Kimoka reached forward and grabbed my hand.
"No!" she sreamed.
"shhh! tattlers are listening!" I muttered under my breath.
she looked around and i stepped forward.
Inch by Inch i stepped torwards the black mouth of the cave.
If i was ment to go in there then its right for me to walk on, if not then i will be cursed.

To be countinued...

Comments

[renarde5298]

i like it

[Xx_Br0k3n_H34rt_xX]

umm where is it going, its good but where is it going?

[white light of snow]

spelling man spelling

[Purpleinator]

pretty good. work on the spelling though