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It was the first dance ive ever been to, and so far it was ok. Not like the father-daughter ones, but somewhat similar.
I sat down tired from shaking my hips. It was now a slow song and i didnt want to dance. But everyone eles was.
I was at the top of the bleches smiling, and giggling at my friends. People would go up to the microphone and suggest 2 people to dance with eachother. My friend brianna, was dating a cute guy named sam. Many people would say there names.
I saw my friend ellie, she was dancing with her crush, dalton, and dalton's gf was crying. I smiled and gave her a thumbs up.
Suddenly i heard a voice firmiliar on the mic. It was my crush lorenzo, and he was requesting a couple to dance. "Lorenzo and ..." I crossed my fingers, and waited. "Bailey."
My face flushed, and i stared at my feet. I itched my head and looked up. Alyssa, my best friend, walked up to the mic. I told her to request me and lorenzo but i changed my mind. I did the "No stop, cut it out." sign, but she didnt see. I smacked my forehead and shook my head. "Lorenzo and Whitney."
Crap! I rubbed my temples and stared at Alyssa with the "I'm gonna kill you after this." look.
She blushed and walked back to her bf. I blushed while lorenzo stared at me. I got up and walked down the stairs. Many of my friends were watching me. He grabbed my hand and we danced.
"Just kinda like 5th grade huh?" He said. I nodded and watched my feet. He grabbed my chin and stared into my big beautiful blue eyes. He brushed back my bangs and smiled.
I grinned alittle and stared back.
"Has anyone, but your mom, told you, that you have amazing eyes." He grinned.
I shook my head and blushed. He lowered his head so i could feel his sweet breath on my cheek. He moved his head to my lips, and began to kiss me. My eyes widened, and i awoke from my dream.
"Damn!" I yelled.
- by Maddie Amberton |
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- | Submitted on 05/03/2009 |
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- Title: Was it last chance.
- Artist: Maddie Amberton
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Description:
i was at a dance and it just gave me an idea to write this, it may suck, ill fix it up, you just tell me what to do.
enjoy! - Date: 05/03/2009
- Tags: last chance
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Comments (2 Comments)
- afliction - 05/21/2009
- "and i awoke from my dream 'damn it'." LOL
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- Cl3v3rRey - 05/04/2009
- It was kinda of funny at the end but this is really good you should continue!
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