daemon,humans and nymphs and v

• Artist: johanaX_X
• Description: i hoped you enjoyed my new book chapter 1 yes i am writting a book
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: daemon humans nyphns vampires

one day i got on a train then i saw a daemon then a nymph i am a human in a human world but it seems i am not i have been hurt by daemons but nymphs are nice to me i can relate to them lol but i cant relate to daemons daemons are my worse nightmare but vampires are nice to me also lol i can relate to them and nymphs lol but daemons i cant relate too its hard in my new life here i hoped you enjoyed my new book chapter 1 yes i am writting a book

Comments

[Hidariude]

I don't want to dissuade you from writing, but you need punctuation, do not use lol, and make it longer. This doesn't say much. However, I do think it may have potential if you can atually say something actually happened here.I look forward to the next draft wink

[johanaX_X]

if it sucks ill write it agin shish

[Killer Bunny of Doom]

This sucks. I'm sorry but it does. 1/5