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One day while the girls are singing doing their chores,they heard some footstep.
Adelaire:What's that? It can't be an animal.
Claire: Why can you say so?
Adelaire: I have been hunting a lot,Claire. I know the difference between animal and a human. An animal sounds like so noisy. This once just so quite.
Blaire:Maybe it's the boys living next door.
Claire: But what are they doing here?
Adelaire: I don't know. We better get inside.
The boys who are still walking have been feeling nervous.
William: So what are we gonna tell them? We can't just barge in and tell them we are here for them.
Edward: I guess he got the point.
Philippe: I don't know what to say ok. I'll know when we'll get there.
Edward: I have an idea. What if we'll just tell them you dropped the arrow that you made here.
Philippe: And to think they will believe it?
Edward: Of course they will....well...maybe.
Philippe: Hey,what if I'll really drop my arrow here. It's more better. At least,I'm not gonna feel any guilt.
William: That's more like it.
Philippe: I'll just put it here.
After all those talk,they finally arrived near to the girls' house. William went near to the door followed by his brothers and knocked.
Adelaire: Who's there?
Philippe: I'm Philippe. My brothers,Edward and William are here too.
Adelaire: (opened the door) What are you doing here?
Philippe: We just happened to throw my arrow here and I was hoping you saw it.
Adelaire: No, we haven't.
Philippe: I see.
Blaire: If it's just an arrow, why are you looking for it desperately?
Edward: Because he made it all by himself.
Adelaire: Oh, so you can make arrows.
Philippe: Yeah,what about it?
Claire: I think there's something wrong around here.Is that really the reason why you're here?
William: Well........he's really here for.........
Philippe:Shut up.
William: I didn't say anything yet.
Blaire: What if you'll just tell us the truth and we'll believe you.
Edward: OK. Acting away people. Go on Philippe.
Philippe: No,you go first.
William: We can't. You're the eldest.
Phillipe: OK,Ok. (facing Adelaire) What really is your name?
Adelaire: Adelaire. This is Blaire and Claire.
Philippe: Oh,nice names.
Adelaire: Thanks.
Philippe: Well Adelaire,I'm really here because of you.
Adelaire:What?!!
Philippe: Can I talk to you for just a while?
Adelaire: Ok.
Philippe: C'mon.
Blaire: (looking at Claire) Look who goes there?
Edward: (interrupting) So you're Blaire, right?
Blaire: Yeah.
Edward: Can I ask you something?
Blaire: Sure.
Edward: I mean privately.
Blaire: Ok.
Edward:Well then....c'mon.
Claire: I think we're the only ones left.
William: Yeah. Hey, maybe we should talk too.
Claire: Yeah.
William: Let's go.
So they talked at each other going in different direction.
Hope you like this. Continuation will be here soon. Pls comment.
- by goldenheart8 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: HIdden Disguises2
- Artist: goldenheart8
- Description: This is the continuation of part 1. Please comment. Anyway, the words they are saying are like a dialog because I wanted you to understand everything.
- Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: hidden disguises2
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Comments (4 Comments)
- shimmersilver - 08/25/2009
- Wow. That's a cool story you got there. I was hoping you would tell me what happened next. Pls pm me when you post part 3. K? Pls. biggrin
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- Cl3v3rRey - 04/21/2009
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Hmm. It's cool and I would like to know what happens next!
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- icefox5 - 03/02/2009
- cool...
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- Miyako Daisuki - 02/06/2009
- I'm sorry I really can't be bothered to read the whole thing... the writing is too boring but so far ( the first top bit) is fine just keep on going
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