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I ran...
I ran as hard as I could, away from that place. It was all his fault. It was his fault that I became like this. He turned me into this... he turned me into a monster. Because of my abilities, he used me and made me a puppet under his control. O how I longed to escape that place. That cursed jail that kept me prisoner all my life. Everything I knew and loved, locked away and burned. He abused me, made me his toy, and made me suffer endlessly.
All these thoughts ran through my head as I ran as hard as I could. And as the rain fell continuously, blocking my sight, I heard a the engine of a car behind me. I nearly screamed. It was him. He was chasing after me. Panicking I ran faster, and harder. But its pointless, isn't it? He would just chase after me, like a hungry wolf after lumbering sheep. Sooner or later he'll catch me and shred me to peices. I tripped and fell, crying knowing that I could never escape his clutches. The car stopped behind me, and he came out and grabbed me. "Just behave and be a good little toy" he whispered into my ear. I screamed in my head. A loud, peircing, unheard scream.
- by M i d n i g h t x M u s e |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/23/2009 |
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- Title: The Escape
- Artist: M i d n i g h t x M u s e
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Description:
Short Story that I wrote when I was bored,
but if this story gets good results or something, im willing to make it into a longer story.
p.s. please note that this story makes you imagine what goes on
and that i didn't give the main character a gender - Date: 01/23/2009
- Tags: short story
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Comments (7 Comments)
- StrikeFreedomX10 - 03/07/2010
- WRITE MORE I WANT MORE!!!
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- mariellesage - 10/14/2009
- Please write more. I want to know what happened and what happens next. sad
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- Ditto Blob - 10/14/2009
- Amazing! 10 out of five!
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- xxMoonlight_Dreamxx - 04/04/2009
- Omg! That was amazing! So deep to!!!!
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- Madame le Pancake - 01/23/2009
- Interasting! I really liked it, hope u make it longer. 5/5
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- xDemonxOfxDeathx - 01/23/2009
- That was really good. You should think about writing more because that was great. (try a larger font) 5/5 {{Rate please?}}
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