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After some formal compliments, Ice begin to be a Close friend of Emily. that girl who say to love Vampires seems to be good. "Dad will like this history!" Ice thinked to herself.
Emily Watts was a girl, who appeared here, a girl who like vampires. Those mystical ones seems to be more familiar to she as any other people on the family. short light-blue hair, a rock girl pants, and a normal shirt. anything uncommon at this point.
Ice asked to Emily if she wanted a Sundae. Emily accepted without hesitation.
- I like vannila- Emily said, getting a generous portion of the sundae with the wafer of the top.
- I see. um...well...er....e...Em...Emily....- Ice talked (like this, really!) with his heart beating so strong as a rock concert
-Yes?- Emily said with a great expectation.
- do you...do you..
-Talk! you are getting me nervous!
-EMILY, DO YOU WANNA GET OUT WITH ME!!!!- Ice screamed
- I...I...
- i see... you don't want it, right?
- I will like it! sure!!!
- REALLY!
-sure, Ice
- so, see you tomorrow, lady
and give a friendly kiss at Emily.
- by Lord Zane Savage |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: The Forgotten-Chapter 1
- Artist: Lord Zane Savage
- Description: Chapter 1: A love is coming
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: forgottenchapter
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Mischiefwulf - 12/17/2008
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omg...i want to scream at u right now.
begin- began in 1st sent.
dont capitalize close
cap. That in next sentance
next sentence thought not thinked
liked no like vampires
ok there are to many mistakes just delete this whole post, think of a better plot, a not so corny name as Ice, and make it longer. also you need some serious spelling - Report As Spam