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Thorns of Love Like the rose that never blossoms, In the grey, dark world we live upon, We sleep when awake, And are awoken when asleep. To stay close to your desires, And to hold on to those dear to you so close and so tight, Means to show the thorns of the un-blossomed rose that remains hidden for reasons untold. The pain of those held so close, With blood falling from the thorns that pierced the skin, The same thorns that hide our true identity from all and ourselves. Without knowing, And without our consent, We harm those that we hold so close, From the untold self of the thorns from the rose that never blossoms. The ones held so close, The ones that say they shall always be with you, Can only drop the rose from the pain they suffer from the long desire to hold that rose so close. For all things must die, And without the beholder of the rose, It shall never again show its once true beauty from which it was born. To die in the grey world of that which beauty is a mere blinded color from the falling blood of the thorns, From the once dearest, To a mere image of memories that can only bring suffering that was once joy. (tell me what you think.)

Posted by: Hetono Fri Jul 08, 2005 @ 11:05pm

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Madame_Zombie_Stix
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Commented on: Sat Jul 09, 2005 @ 08:15pm


	Its SOOO pretty! crying

Commented on: Sun Jul 10, 2005 @ 06:29pm


	thats sooo pretty and so cute oh my god a tear came to my eye crying heart that makes me love you even morekiss heart

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Commented on: Mon Jul 11, 2005 @ 06:03pm


	smiles it's amazing..really good and shows many emotions..i like it...alot..cool...nods

Commented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 02:32am


	just sits in awe thats awesome... ive felt that way b4

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Commented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 04:02pm


	smiles its beautiful you never told me that you could write poetry.....but its meaning of us hiding our true selves is so very true i dont even know who i really am....as far as i know im just a lost soul wandering this earth looking for a way home

Commented on: Thu Jul 21, 2005 @ 12:46am


	speechless... stutters That was beautiful work. smile

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Commented on: Mon Jul 25, 2005 @ 09:52pm


	that was sooooooo pritty

Commented on: Mon Jul 25, 2005 @ 10:49pm


	That was awsome

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Commented on: Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 04:30am


	ur really good..I'm glad u enjoy doing poems 3nodding ...that was really beautiful...sometimes I can relate to it...maybe alot of people can...but yeah..whatever...anyways..yeah good job...and nice work wink ...I couldn't even last doing a poem like that! sweatdrop confused whee actually...I can try but...I suck at it so yeah... sweatdrop I loved it... and I really mean it... ^ ^ blaugh xd

Commented on: Wed Jul 27, 2005 @ 01:14am


	i like it it was so pretty

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Commented on: Fri Aug 05, 2005 @ 10:54pm


	crying That one gets me right in the heart...I read it like....I dono how many times!!! sniff it's sooo good. I felt that way a few times! -sniff- cry

Commented on: Sun Aug 07, 2005 @ 10:02pm


	i love it

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Commented on: Thu Aug 11, 2005 @ 05:23pm


	bravo!!!!!!!!!!lol

Commented on: Thu Aug 11, 2005 @ 05:51pm


	I looked at your Journal, hope you dont mind lol. You write poetry very well. Me, I can only do chapter stories or short one...

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Commented on: Thu Aug 11, 2005 @ 06:46pm


	sissy boy xp evil ninja

Commented on: Fri Aug 12, 2005 @ 12:56am


	Beautiful. Just Beautiful. Words like that could move mountains. Certainly better than any poem I've wrote. You have a lot of talent. But ofcourse I was expecting such beautiful talent from such a beautiful soul?

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Commented on: Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 08:37pm


	Awesome. But everyone has thorns. 3nodding ((btw I think I understood wat i meant for a second.))

Commented on: Wed Aug 31, 2005 @ 01:59am


	i like it and its very deep did u write it

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Commented on: Mon Sep 05, 2005 @ 03:59am


	the way i feel about u....yet u ignore me

Commented on: Mon Sep 05, 2005 @ 04:00am


	the way i feel about u....yet u ignore me

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Commented on: Tue Oct 11, 2005 @ 12:49am


	lack of mind hold over this world sir you are going crazy you are a odd ball is you ask me but well you did not and i am a bit of an odd ball my self but do what you will it is good but not to rave about

Commented on: Mon Jan 09, 2006 @ 11:22pm


	Thats deep man,deep. domokun

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Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 10:47pm


	I'm jealous... that kicks the a of the one sad poem I wrote stare**

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