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reallity... if you hold on to the light, or faith that others do it shall turn to darkness and become your fears...light turns to darkness and love turns to hatred inside ones self, no one to help and nothing to hold on to, just the sorrow that was once happieness...for all things that are held on tight shall be lost as soon as gained, and if not of any care the one thing that you desire shall only be a mirror away, reflecting the desire to fears and the peace that some desire rests within their own hatred... (tell me what you think)

Posted by: Hetono Mon Apr 25, 2005 @ 11:23pm

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Commented on: Tue Apr 26, 2005 @ 10:36pm


	i think its really good it confused me in a good sorta way...makes me think

Commented on: Wed Apr 27, 2005 @ 12:55am


	that's really beautiful...

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Commented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 10:41pm


	that sort of speaks the truth of human kind.its sort of sad the way we act.only a few of us realize it.good job.its beautiful.

Commented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 11:35pm


	thats really wonderful

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Commented on: Tue May 03, 2005 @ 02:51am


	oh! it tis most beautiful indeed =3 I love it! heart

Commented on: Wed May 04, 2005 @ 10:46pm


	it holds a lot of emotion and it very good... i love it =^^=

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Commented on: Fri May 20, 2005 @ 02:28am


	dude that was really good you can do better but that was really good

Commented on: Sat May 21, 2005 @ 07:00pm


	that is an awesome poem and i thought it was reaqlly good your great at this

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Commented on: Tue May 24, 2005 @ 11:46pm


	Tis gwed such....>Detail it goes into me mind

Commented on: Thu May 26, 2005 @ 11:59pm


	This is a clue... biggrin I love it! so detailed, with emotion too

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Commented on: Tue May 31, 2005 @ 07:55pm


	dude, that was so totaly wicked!!!!

Commented on: Wed Jun 01, 2005 @ 01:37am


	nice man biggrin

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Commented on: Wed Jun 01, 2005 @ 01:47am


	nice man biggrin

Commented on: Fri Jun 03, 2005 @ 04:20pm


	nice work nice work. i write my own poems from time to time. most of em are about my emotions ^^

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Commented on: Mon Jun 06, 2005 @ 10:24pm


	Wow.. I like it..

Commented on: Fri Jun 10, 2005 @ 11:51pm


	it's true...that's really good...but you still need to stop harming trees...but that is really good

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Commented on: Sun Jun 12, 2005 @ 06:04am


	woah eek ..where the heck do u come up with this?...that's really awesome...I liked it..its weird..in a sort of way..how most of us humans act that way....ur poems does make me think...but anyways... good job! blaugh 3nodding xd

Commented on: Mon Jun 20, 2005 @ 04:24am


	eek wow its amazing you are a very good poet and you are very deep how long have you been writing for? you must have been doing this for a while. do you speak from experience confused

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Commented on: Mon Jun 20, 2005 @ 04:31am


	PS. i dont see why you think that people dont care all the people that read your poem loved it. be proud your a great poet 3nodding whee wink heart razz lol

Commented on: Mon Jun 20, 2005 @ 04:32am


	eek wow its amazing you are a very good poet and you are very deep how long have you been writing for? you must have been doing this for a while. do you speak from experience confused

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Commented on: Mon Jun 20, 2005 @ 11:56pm


	Thats... beautiful

Commented on: Tue Jun 28, 2005 @ 03:12am


	...........wow........wow.....that was....amazing...i'm speechless now.. heart i write poems too! they're all in my journal..check then out if you want..^_^

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Commented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 04:06pm


	that is so good and on my birthday you wrote it thats really cool as well as the message behind it

Commented on: Fri Aug 05, 2005 @ 10:48pm


	That poem makes you think...it is very inlightening. ^-^ I love it.

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Commented on: Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 08:33pm


	Pure is impure......impure is pure.....good poem monk.

Commented on: Thu Aug 25, 2005 @ 03:40am


	WoW! I can REALLY relate to that! That's Fabulouse! U'r a great writer!

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Commented on: Mon Sep 05, 2005 @ 06:26pm


	thats deep im starting to write in my journal now blaugh

Commented on: Mon Jan 09, 2006 @ 11:18pm


	claps Its WONDERFUL!! cry Ahaha blaugh Hmm....poor person..he/she just needs some comfort from someone special or a new perspective on how they see things. I didn't really get the last part but okay! Its still good. 3nodding domokun

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Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 10:45pm


	eek That's really good... and I had to pause Led Zepellin to read it and ponder upon it ^.^

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