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this shall be created so that I can type my poerty and other stuff like that (like anyone cares) this shall also be used to see if people apriciate my work of writing (and if you respond to be funny or a smart a**; get a life).
Poem promise #2
"Sorry it's tooken me so long; I've been dealing with a lot of sorrow as of late. This is one of the more darker poems, inspirated and written from the remainder of my fading darkness...I hope all to enjoy."



Hourglass ofDeath




In the passing days, the dimming light grows dimmer,

As my heart grows colder.

In passing time, my wounds have bled,

Though never of the pain could be felt,

For the sorrow of the wounds was atonement for sin enough.

These blood stained hands,

Cased upon me for the wounds I bear not to show,

And lead those who bear of love, to the blinding light,

A false truth that is wanted to be heard, though in reality, is of false.

In passing time, my soul has lived and fallen;

Its chained wings shall never rise again in darkness.

Through the Hourglass of Death, I wait for my time,

Not to fall death to the bleeding of my wounds,

To be cased away in darkness for eternity,

But for the light I blindly follow, knowing it's there, waiting, wanting me to come...And so I shall.






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Hetono
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 07, 2006 @ 04:53pm
"Not one comment?!"


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 07, 2006 @ 09:48pm
-Thinks about it and snaps my fingers.-Good job. ^^ I like this one a lot. It's deep, and shows a lot of feeling, bravo, sir. Bravo.



Mistress_Dark_Korigashine
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angel_223
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 07, 2006 @ 11:44pm
I like it ^^ keep up the good work! *thumbs up* ^_^


commentCommented on: Thu Jun 08, 2006 @ 04:52am
"it shows how you feel. you wish to die yet you still live on for thoes who you love and care about and vice versa. it's turly amazing...no amazing dones't do it good but the only word i can think of it is turly amazing Angel. Never Change."

<3
Someone lost and maybe forgotten.



Beautiful. Chaos.
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Amy.L.Lee
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 09, 2006 @ 03:33am
Gah. Thats really sad. Like not just the words, but the overall feeling of the poem. Do you have an open wound that someone is pouring salt into, cause thats how it feels. But this is just the opinion of someone who is but a small part in this great confusing game which we call life.


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 09, 2006 @ 06:38pm
thats so sad and really deep,.. but u should be happy.. and i like u'r poem keep at it ok! 3nodding ^ ^ blaugh



A far_off_memorie
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Athira_Korigashine
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 12, 2006 @ 04:55am
aww...Its really sad but awesome...^ ^....hmm....Angel....u must've gone throught some tough times to be writing more deeper...^ ^ but its ur style and I love that about u...^ ~


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 23, 2006 @ 08:35am
"...this poem......i understand now....."



BitchCupSkiddleDiddle
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Akira Ryukami
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 26, 2006 @ 11:52am
nevr mind i was gonna coment but ill just shut up now... sweatdrop its a great poem


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 04, 2006 @ 12:53am
I should write a new poem...



Hetono
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Athira_Korigashine
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 04:28am
u should...guess who?! ^ ^ *covers ur eyes with my hands*


commentCommented on: Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 03:02am
These words are truly amazing.
You are great at this, and you really know how to get your point across.
Keep it up. I look forward to seeing more of your beautiful work.
I thank you for helping me all too often.
You are a great friend.



xoJxExSxSox
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Athira_Korigashine
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 06, 2006 @ 01:56am
*looks over at u* man...I miss those times....*reminisces* oh well...I how long it would take u....


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 05:05am
That was... amazing. That word pales in comparison to your poem. The pain... the sadness... the life that's almost too hard to live... This was so packed full of emotion. I hope to read more of you work in the future. Did you also write the poem on your profile?



BrokenShinobi
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