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Now and forever... Now and forever shall you be in my mind. Forever till the end of time. Now and forever shall I hear your name. Through the distant shadows of my sorrows. Now and forever shall I cry an empty plea. Just for one to see what it really means to me. Now and forever shall I walk alone. Wanting to hold the hand that is forever gone. Now and forever shall I remain a distance, from the once joy that has now braught me sorrow. Now and forever shall I wonder what truely went wrong. Or if destiny braught upon more grief then joy. Now and forever shall I never be in your eyes, the one you could call someone important. Now and forever shall I live alone. Wanting to go back in time and end it all there. Now and forever shall I wish to be, together again with what I could never see. Now and forever shall I never more, your trust that I once looked up to as guidence. Now and forever...shall come and go. As my pleads for forgiveness shall never be heard from something that was one of a kind.

Posted by: Hetono Wed Sep 21, 2005 @ 01:16am

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Commented on: Wed Sep 21, 2005 @ 01:52am


	Aww. That was so great. You are an excellent writer! Keep up the good work xd

Commented on: Tue Sep 27, 2005 @ 03:12am


	Its really pretty Jianichie and very sad..I love ur way of how u write, sweet but sad..this poem..well actually all of them are true..its somehow the way I feel somtimes...^ ^

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Commented on: Fri Sep 30, 2005 @ 12:01am


	hehe there Right Good Job..it's freaking awesome!! ^ ^ xd 3nodding blaugh love it!

Commented on: Fri Sep 30, 2005 @ 01:42am


	aww....that was....awesome. 3nodding i really liked it alot. there was so many sad feeling i got from it...how i use to have felt before...but that was in the past, now this is the present. i will just move on to the future, whatever that's waiting for me. whee

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Commented on: Sat Oct 01, 2005 @ 02:12am


	like you said, the past will come and go but we don't know what the future will hold. happyness or sowrrow but we can have hope that the thing we are searching for will come back. that we'll find it and hold on to it forever.

Commented on: Mon Oct 03, 2005 @ 11:14pm


	sits in aww as i tell you:"good job Joseph..it was really good and like those girls said it truely was a beautiful thing to here...brovo and keep up the good work"

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Commented on: Fri Oct 07, 2005 @ 11:11pm


	wow you are a good writer

Commented on: Sun Oct 09, 2005 @ 05:48pm


	brovo that was truely beautiful

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Commented on: Sun Oct 09, 2005 @ 10:34pm


	Like everyone already said... This is really good... reading it is like seeing a part of yourself brought out in words... if that makes any sense that is... sweatdrop

Commented on: Mon Oct 10, 2005 @ 11:30pm


	Wow..it has been awhile since I read your journal...I love this poem..very much. -smiles softly- The emotions that come out...is truely outstanding.

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Commented on: Sun Nov 13, 2005 @ 12:05am


	wow. you really out did yourself this time. i mean it. good job.

Commented on: Thu Dec 01, 2005 @ 09:54pm


	That poem is great. Kinda reminds me of my life. You do some great work, man! Keep it up, I'll be lookin' for more of it.

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Commented on: Mon Jan 09, 2006 @ 11:36pm


	Another sad poem... gonk Well....if this woman makes this guy/girl so sad...they could at least try to think of what went wrong or learn from it but then again....they can't really think of that when their is heart broken...they tend to think of what happened and stuff (not specific but who cares! xd )...anyway,think of the good things! If they break up with the other person (and if they're a good boyfriend or whatever) then they should'nt be beating themselves up! Gah....uh....This is all I'm going to write. blaugh

Commented on: Wed Jan 11, 2006 @ 10:56pm


	good job dude now my poetry looks like crap compared to yours hangs head in shame

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Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 10:49pm


	Damn my pathetic writing skills! That's really good!! heart And I'm a writing major at my high school, how sad...

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