Can you?

• Artist: meerodi
• Description: It's actually supposed to be a romantic poem, but my friend read it and called it "discouraging" >_< Anyways, tell me what you think : )
• Date: 12/26/2010
• Tags: cant canyou forbiddenlove

Feel it.
Can you?
It creeps inside,
It learns to hide,
It kills all pride,
Deep inside.

Hear it.
Can you?
It's voice is gone,
It leads you along
Soft like a song,
Until you're gone.

Trust it.
Can you?
Is it real,
what you feel?
They say no, but still,
It feels real.

Deny it.
Can you?
And if you can't,
This idea they plant
Will lose its rant.
I hope you can't.

Comments

[apollosfavoriteson]

I thought this poem was great, and keep up the good work.

[Ary the Sweet]

My exact words were "Wow, your last words are 'I hope you can't. Isn't that encouraging *lol*" I still think it's an amazing poem doe biggrin DD