a dying mans wish

• Artist: TessaBlackwood-Rose
• Description: I wrote this yesterday it shows many things some people wish for if they are dying but for me it is a symbol of the things you could or should do before you die; for nobody wants to die after they do something bad or hurtful.
• Date: 06/13/2010
• Tags: dying mans wish

Lost broken and dying
you suddenly feel like you are flying
thinking is this the end
wishing for a miracle someone to send
or wishing the pain go away
so on this earth you can stay.

I need a hero
to keep my heart from reaching zero
so i may stay
and give my life the right way
do something right
instead of causing a fight.

Comments

[purplefox911]

has very strong meaning, could use alittle work on the rhymin part.. but over a solid peice ^-^ 4/5

[oHeyLuna]

nice(:

[aisuru kokoro]

wow. this really makes me think....its really good^_^ 5/5