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Becoming a Vampire. : /
I know you won't hear me
I know you're not there
I know you're not listening
but I really don't care.
This spell you've cast on me
won't let me think straight,
I just remember how you lured me,
and how I took the bait.
Your crooked smile,
A wink of your eyes,
I was hooked
I was hypnotized.
I followed you
to your dismal den
where you trapped me,
and unleashed your evil grin.
In one swift movement
you were at my neck
planning the spot
to place the deadly peck.
I felt the piercing pain
of fangs sinking deep down,
everything went numb, leaving only
a sucking sound.
You drained me of all
the red hot liquid running through these veins,
I was left empty and hollow
feeling only pain.
so now I lay here
waiting to awake
awaiting new life,
Or a quick death for our sake.
- by Toxiic Muffin |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Becoming a Vampire.
- Artist: Toxiic Muffin
- Description: A poem about a girl being bit by a Vampire and being transformed into one.
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: becoming vampire
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ree-ree_bear - 07/05/2009
- I love your poem. But what the guy sAid below is right. I was in love with twilight but now the over obession of vampires, are getting out of hand but 5/5
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- Erykus - 03/05/2009
- Very nice description.....although now I'm beginning to dislike the twilight series with the obsessions about vampires its starting, since they're not real 5/5
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- Dragons_rule_the_sky - 01/04/2009
- described it well. almost like you waz there...
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- Gilraen xxx Ringeril - 11/30/2008
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mmm blood.
Very good.
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- Volkhvy - 11/29/2008
- -sniff- Beautiful,beautiful I tell you.
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- Toxiic Muffin - 11/29/2008
- Thanks. >3
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- D3vine D3vil - 11/29/2008
- shweet~ x]
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