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I dare you
A whisper
Complete it
A copper
Once into the ear
Of a dark black raven
Whispering of values
Goodness and heaven
Twice around
And around
Of a great white swan, innocent and pure
The language of evil
A demon's allure
But finally I want you
To tell me of
That red rose of love
So hot and passionate
That summoned my hate
My dare for you
That whisper
Complete it
Kill it
- by Complacent Revenge |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/09/2009 |
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- Title: I dare you to kill
- Artist: Complacent Revenge
- Description: Ok this one is very confusing. At first I wanted to write of hope but then I realised it was heading towards balancing good and evil so I just continued... and came to my senses at the last stanza... so the topmost and bottomost are following each other and the middle ones follow each other... Anyway pls give CONSTRUCTIVE critisism
- Date: 05/09/2009
- Tags: dare kill
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- Rococonut - 05/15/2009
- Um i don't get it. Please explain to me what this means.
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