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HERE IS A STORY THT I AM WORKING ON AND I WANT PPLZ OPINION ON IT WAT I NEED TO CHANGE ALL OF THT STUFF AND I HOPE THT YOU WILL ENJOY IT AND I HOPE THT ONE DAY THT IT WILL BE TURN INTO A BOOK AND BE IN YOUR LOCAL LIBRARY!
ENJOY!!!!!!! mrgreen
It was a sunny normal day for the pack. My brothers, sisters, some others, and me was sitting down in the cave that we slept in. I was awake looking at the great sky. Looking up and wondering what was really out there. Humans, birds, ants, and other species alike. I wondered how was it like to fly, how was it like to dig deeply down into the earth, wondered what it was like to run away from a war, wondered how it felt to have parents. I often wondered all these things. The main thing I wondered what it was like to have a lover. Though I have brothers and sisters in the pack, their not really my brothers and sisters from the litter.
I was born then separated from my real family. Now I have a pack to care to. Who was in the pack was my two brothers, dunkin and goog. Dunkin was the oldest of the two, goog not so much. My two sisters was Lynda and sliver. Lynda was almost the same age of me. She was sort of my vice present. Whenever I was away to hunt for food or I was taking a long sleep, she would be incharge. Of course the others in the pack would kind of complain. Course I wouldn’t really blaim them. Lynda was always trying to teach them about safty first, then I would have to come home or get up from my slumber and save them from bordum! Everyday was like this. Everyday, week, hour, second of the day for me. Though one day was actually to most inventureus in my whole wolf life. That day was when I had to fight for my pack! That was the day when I found my family.
“hey, maxx! Is there anymore food left or did zoom ate it al….again!” that was dunkin. It seemed like he was always hungry. And yes that was my name. I actually had that name around my neck. Ever since I was a pup. But it wasn’t a dog tag that house dogs or pets wear. It was on a key. Like to a house or a shed or something that opens a door. My old friend kingjo, said that my mother found it and some human gave it to her. I guess that she consorted with a human. That’s probably why she disappeared. Either the great wolf banished her forever. Or maybe she got taking in by a human and now living as a pet. But, me I can’t believe that my real brothers and sisters are fallowing in her footsteps. I on the other hand wouldn’t do such a thing. Though I haven’t really met a human before.
“theres probably some left overs go over to the dinner corner and check.” I didn’t want to get up. That and theres probably no food. The dinner corner isn’t really a corner where we eat. Though there is a corner, but it is where I found tike. Tike is the very, very youngest and can barly walk straight. Some of the pack say that he is the apple of my eye. But though he is the youngest of the pack he does need attention. That and he is really a cutie.
“maxx, I think zoom ate it all! You fat big! Eating all my food.” I glared at him, telling him that what he said was rude and should respect the others in the pack. He lowered his head like he was introuble and said sorry under his breath. I stared up to the sky again. He looked up too.
“well it sure is pretty today! I wonder if we can go explore again! Please….maxx!” I shook my head. Then he had to do it! He did the puppy eyes! I tried to ignore him. It didn’t work. I gave up!
“alright! But I have to come. You don’t know what’s out there. There might be the soldiers out. They might grab you and take you away and make you into a soldier!” I nibbled on his ear. He always loves that when I do that.
“ahh, I’m not afraid of them! I’ll tear them apart! I’ll show my fangs! I’ll bite them if they even think about getting near me or the others in the pack!” I rolled my eyes. He is always like this. The soldiers are under the control of the great wolf. The great wolf can see all. As the legend for told. Dunkin always love that story. I pretty much tell him that story every night until he falls asleep. The legend starts as the first wolf to come to these parts of the woods. He made this land. He fought in the battle between wolf and man. The legend tells us that this land was separated from man and wolf. (But I never really know the whole story I got this one from kingjo.) which used to live close by to the great wolf but only saw him once. He said that he was a winter wolf. A winter wolf was really rare in these woods. That’s because it barley ever snows here that and he’s a mix blooded animal. But his color was very useful in the battle.
“sure dunkin. You say that and say that everytime anyone mention the soldiers.
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- Title: leader of the pack
- Artist: maximum_pain369
- Description: about what is a wolf's life about and how being a wolf and having no mother or father, sisters, or brothers, only friendship, only your pack
- Date: 05/06/2010
- Tags: leader pack
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- 13Rin13 - 12/29/2011
- I couldn't even get over the first sentence. When you have more then one person, it is were, not was. I'm like a grammar freak though. So it bugs me greatly.
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