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Alisa’s gray eyes watched the goings on around her. No one would be able to tell if they watched her with just a glance that she was almost entirely blind. Which she felt was worse then being fully blind. But if they watched her closely watched her slow movements in grasping things and pouring. They would without a doubt figure out the girls handicap wasn’t just odd colored eyes.
Alisa turned her eyes around hoping she was staring at a person who she could feel was watching her with fascination. Never had people around here thought someone with a handicap would survive. Much less a girl with such a handicap.
They all thought girls were less then boys. They were lower on the food chain then the cattle around this town. But of course it could be because it was a religious compound. And she Alisia prophet of the all seeing god had been chosen.
The ones staring at her were new to the compound didn’t know her importance just yet. Another day and they would be sitting in their over sized church watching as she was led out and exclaimed to be only second two god him, or her as Alisia saw it, self.
She shook her head turning back to the duties she was told to perform in the area. She was o collect the food that others grew. Wash them and bless them with her purity. Meaning all she had to do was touch everything these fools ate to make them happy.
“How could they let such an abomination live here. She is so crippled she can not see and if she can barely. The lord would never allow her into his home. The lord is all seeing. She is not.” They whispered amongst themselves.
She had heard it all before. The same words over and over ago. Little did they know. She was in a way all seeing. She could see things that were to come. Things that no one else could predict.
Her eyes moved up as she heard the bells. Time to pray. Every one stopped what they were doing. And knelt where they were the heads up to the lord their hands clasped or simply placed palm to palm and prayed to the sky prayed for redemption for all their sins. Whatever they happened to be. Even the little ones. She could hear one woman praying for god to forgive her for looking at a man other then her husband in lust.
- by Admara Tanier |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/10/2010 |
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- Title: Alisa's Life at the Compound.
- Artist: Admara Tanier
- Description: I made this while at my little brothers football party. This is just the start of something that could be big. Alisa was born at a compound she is almost fully blind. But she has premonitions.
- Date: 01/10/2010
- Tags: alisas life compound
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- MrJamesXOXO - 05/13/2010
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This is a nice story but I think you should put more drama or scenes in it
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