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Racing down the sidewalks of the moonlit canals
A glowing sphere above us illuminates our way
Gasping hard and adenaline pumping
Your breathing is harsh and coarse, just like mine
I feel you, your laughter rushing down my spine
Excitement in my eyes, fire in yours
Nothing matter to us but tonight
A gondola bobs all alone in our path
You tackle and we fall as one in its depths
Our breathing syncs as our hearts continue to race
Your arms around me tight, our bodies close together
The little boat rocks as we embrace and look up to the stars
Ti amo, you whisper
It tickles my ear
I shudder
You touch your lips to mine, heat courses through my veins
Nothing matters to us but tonight
The sky lightens up with a brand new day
Our calm breaths mesh between our bodies
Slow and steady as the rising sun
I wake up to your enchanting eyes taking in all of me
All I can think of is spending forever just like this
Another kiss touches my lips
As gentle and tantalizing as the music in the air
The canal lights up as the palazzos wake up
Taking my hand in yours, you pull me out of our shelter
Walking down the street hand in hand
Nothing matter to us but this new day
- by birrie_gurl |
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- | Submitted on 07/24/2009 |
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- Title: Ti Amo
- Artist: birrie_gurl
- Description: A poem of a romantic dream that takes place in Venice, Italy
- Date: 07/24/2009
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- Purple-shoes616 - 07/28/2009
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very descriptive
interesting language, word choice, and good format
a few grammar mistakes - Report As Spam