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There's was a bully, he hurt me a lot. I hated this fat kid. Then i finally snapped, i don't know what came over me... I brought a kitchen knife to school saw him in the cafeteria stuffing his face all alone. i took the knife in hand, knocked him down to the floor, and cut off his foot to immobilize him... His screams were like beautiful sirens in my ears, his tears looked like priceless diamonds in my sadistic mind. i took off his glasses popped out the lens, stuffed the frame down his throat, and cut out his eyes. Finally, i put both lens in each eye socket...
"I want you to see death..." I left the cafeteria with blood stains on my face, sleeves and body, i felt... good.
- Title: I Once Wanted to Kill Someone.
- Artist: NeoLuxis
- Description: Blood and not for the feint of heart, bloody murder stories are my thing, and this is only part one of my series. Explicit dialogue is not in any of my stories, however there is a lot of blood and murder.
- Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: once wanted kill someone
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- Ty Gwynnia - 01/23/2010
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That's awesome! *thumbs up*
I think you should do a run through for any punctuation or capitalization errors. Also, you should give more detail for the killer. =D - Report As Spam
- eremallllllll - 07/07/2009
- Yu should add more details like what did he do too you and stuff like that u did really good in the middle but it seems like your skipping sum importain detials. i know i spell shitty -.-'
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- The Angel of Desire - 04/18/2009
- O____O
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- Luminene - 04/10/2009
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IS THIS REAL?! eek OH NO HES GONNA KILL ME!!AHHHHH!!
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- Nikoshiashi - 04/07/2009
- Wow that seems crazy O.o but I guess its good but crazy good, but crazy biggrin
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- MyrLynn - 04/07/2009
- OK, I'm diggin the psycho, but a second for editing would have been awesome razz
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