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Pokemon Journey 3
Sora felt the wing attack hit her in the front where Sneael is. When she fell she felt weird. She didn’t feel weird because she was falling, she felt weird because she didn’t feel the fury swipes. When she hit the ground she looked at the sableye and saw a charmander hitting it with a flamethrower. Then Sora saw a guy come over to her and helped her up.
“are you okay?” the guy asked.
“yeah.” Sora replied. Riolu I want you and eevee to come back now but be careful. Sora told Riolu through her mind.
Okay, but why? Riolu thought back.
You’ll see. Sora thought.
“not another brat.” the man said in frustration.
Sora saw a bush flicker and then Riolu and Eevee came out and stood next to Sora.
“now that you have your pokemon do you want to help me battle this guy?” the boy asked.
“sure.” Sora said. “Eevee use quick attack on Pidgeotto.” Sora ordered her Eevee. Eevee ran for Pidgeotto and then jumped into the air and hit him.
“Charmander use slash on the Sableye.” the boy told his Charmander. The Charmander came up behind the Sableye and slashed it in the back.
“you brats want to play that way then fine! Pidgeotto use wing attack on Eevee and Sableye use night slash on Charmander.” the man said. The Pidgeotto flew up in the air then came crashing down onto Eevee and the Sableye hit Charmander in the stomach.
“eeeee!” Eevee yelled in pain.
“char!” Charmander yelped.
“send me into battle.” Riolu whispered to Sora. Sora shook her head no. “but why?” Riolu asked.
“I want you to go up behind the man and hit him with aura sphere” Sora said and. Riolu nodded and diapered into the bushes.
“Charmander use flamethrower.” the boy ordered.
“Eevee use shadow ball.” Sora said to Eevee. The flamethrower and shadow ball hit both of the guys pokemon.
“this is the reason why I hate kids.” the man said. “Pidgeotto use air slash Sableye use zen headbutt.” His pokemon came at Sora’s and the boys pokemon quickly.
“Eevee!” Sora yelled. Sora put the Sneael in the boy’s hand and then went in front of Eevee and Charmander to block the attacks from hitting them.
“AHHHHHHHHHHH!” Sora yelled in pain as the attacks hit her in the back.
“this girl is going to get herself killed one of these days.” the boy said to himself. “come out Shinx and use spark on Pidgeotto and then bite on Sableye.” he said and threw out a poke ball and Shinx came out and glowed yellow and rammed into the Pidgeotto then ran and bit the Sableye. The Pidgeotto and the Sableye both fainted.
“well if I can’t win with weak pokemon I guess I will do it my self.” the man said and returned his pokemon then walked over to Sora.
“Riolu now.” Sora ordered then Riolu jumped out of the bushes and hit the guy with an aura sphere. The man went flying into the forest somewhere.
“hey are you okay?” the boy asked when he came over to Sora.
“I think so.” Sora replied and stood up.
“thanks for saving my Charmander I don’t know what I would do with out him.” the boy said. “the name is Tai.”
“Tai. I know you.” Sora said.
“Sora! I don’t believe it I thought you would never start your journey because of your mom.” Tai said.
“well I kind of snuck out and I should be saying thank you to you.” Sora replied.
“no problem and here is your Sneael.” Tai told her and handed her the Sneael.
“he’s not mine. I saw him faint in front of me so I wanted to help him.” Sora said and took the Sneael.
“here give it one of these.” Tai told her and took out a revive and gave it to Sora.
Sora took it and gave it to Sneael. The Sneael woke up and looked around and looked at Sora.
“Sne.” the Sneael said and hugged Sora.
“your welcome.” Sora said then asked, “Sneael would you like to come with me and my pokemon we could use one more?”
“sne.” Sneael said and jumped out of Sora’s hand onto the ground.
“okay Poke ball go.” Sora said and threw a poke ball at Sneael. The poke ball hit the Sneael and a light came around the Sneael and it went into the poke ball. The ball shook twice and then dinged. Sora picked up the poke ball and threw it and Sneael came out.
“so Sora where are you heading to?” Tai asked.
“ to Olkmari why?” Sora replied.
“I was just wondering and maybe we can go together.” Tai suggested………..
To be continued.
Sorry it took so long to write it and the fourth one will be out soon!!!
- by narusaku4life |
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- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: Pokemon journey 3!!!
- Artist: narusaku4life
- Description: the third part of Sora's journey to be a pokemon master. this one took me a long time because i had to think of an idea for this one. this one is the longest so far so enjoy!!
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: pokemon journey
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Comments (5 Comments)
- LabTechJK - 06/10/2009
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Lots of errors bud, but I'll give it a 2/5*.
Use better punctuation, as well as better grammar. - Report As Spam
- Fantasizing Dreams - 04/02/2009
- nice job! pokemon rockes!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- The_King_of_Bloodshed - 03/28/2009
- WOW really really really great job!!! i love it!
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- sookie411 - 03/28/2009
- really great job!!!!!!! make next one soon! biggrin
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