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I was a young girl and had just moved half way across the world. I have always been diferent. Nobody ever liked me. They rejected me always. I was left out in games, play dates, and activitys. Nobody had true love for me as i did for some of them.
On June102001 I wrote a horible story about people comeing from hell and dieing in slow painful deaths from un-known creatures. I wrote about my love saving me, and everyone dieing.
The next day, the sky was dark, everyone stayed in their houses as a windy storm was twisting and whinding up. I watched as the ground rose. It crackled and broke. A giant wolf came up in the pitch black sky. It howled. Then i knew, it was my hound from hell. It became millions of wolfs with sharp painful teeth. Everyone ran outside in the dark storm to see what was happening. The wolfs ran around grabbing each person by their necks eating their gushing guts and pealing their flesh off down to the bone. They screamed as their family members got killed and they tried to run and hide but the wolfs grabed them and it was too late. I sat and watched whispering "I told you, you would pay."
A wolf was heading toward me, bashing threw over six million dead blood gushing bodys. When all of a sudden a man alittle taller than me about my age jumped out in front of the wolf and stabbed it. The wolf lay there in a puddle of blood. The man picked me up and i dug my face into his chest. He carried me off to a cave deep into the woods. There i was safe and we soon fell in love. We stayed there for the rest of our lives watching eachother makeing sure we never got harmed. And the world just was never the same again. It was dark. It smelled of six million rotting dead bodys. But i was safe with my love and that was all that mattered.
- by Trouble Gail 3 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/23/2008 |
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- Title: The hounds from hell
- Artist: Trouble Gail 3
- Description: This is a dark story. A peice of my inside world. What i see when im alone. Things i do. This is me.
- Date: 11/23/2008
- Tags: hounds from hell
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Coosane - 03/08/2010
- Reminds me of something I would write, only I would word it differently... but it's really interesting
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- Shaduf - 08/22/2009
- You scare me a little.
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- Trouble Gail 3 - 06/27/2009
- This is my worst writing EVER!
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- darktroubleness - 12/19/2008
- oh wow, this was your first? its cool =D
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- Trouble Gail 3 - 12/13/2008
- thx guys
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- XXkams - 11/29/2008
- wow!its wonderful!!!
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- um jello - 11/29/2008
- i loved it
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