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~Part One~
~The Past~
It was quiet as the birds chirped. The creek flowed quickly through the forest. Bugs were silent not wanting to fall prey to the singing birds. The wind blew every now and again swiping the golden brown leaves off their branchs. However something was amiss in this peacefull forest when a lone traveler would walk in he could feel something dreadfull watching him...stalking him like he was fresh meat. Even the bravest of all ninjas who had un i nto save a child would run out screaming he's seen a demon of monstrous power. The child, the age of 13, had gone into the woods never to be seen again. The story of the demon has earned the forest its name...The Forest of Demons.
Who was this little child? Her name was Akira Uzumaki and she had just lost her parents in a fight to save Konoha from a demon known as The Nine-tailed fox. Akira took care of her baby brother Naruto after this untill he was 8 years old. During this time she also made a friend of Itachi Uchiha and his younger brother Sasuke Uchiha. You couldn't find those two apart not even on a mission. That was untill the murder of the Uchiha clan. Akira had gotten worried about Itachi because he had been acting strangly the past few. She knew it was late, but Akira knew that they would understand...only to her horror she saw the entire clan dead and Sasuke passed out in the road.....the thing that got to her the most was Itachi only standing there untill he closed his eyes and dissapeared. After this was when Akira ran into the Forest of Demons.
~The end of Part One~
- by BuildingBee |
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- | Submitted on 10/05/2008 |
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- Title: We're still friend right? pt 1
- Artist: BuildingBee
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Description:
Part one The Past (or something. I can't think right. I have a cold and had to take something for it @_@)
This is the first of my Itachi love story.
Do you like it? Please comment.
Don't like it? Don't comment. - Date: 10/05/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- animalloverz - 10/05/2008
- i like it. u watch naruto too!
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- Yumi Saikin - 10/05/2008
- I think you should finish your other story before starting a new one... Oh well, who am I to judge? Anyway, I agree with Kirara about the errors but besides that I think it's a good start.
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- BuildingBee - 10/05/2008
- ~looks back at her thing~ wow i'm surprised I just got that wrong. lol
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- Bubblegum Bishonen - 10/05/2008
- u have typing errors + should put periods ? subject ends. But overall 2nd pharagraph was good so 4/5
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