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A few new poems. Huzzah!






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The Simi Knows Best
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 20, 2006 @ 04:12pm
Awesome!

I liked them both...but the first one kinda confused me. So you should explain it to me.

The second one was like...my favorite poem you've ever written. XD It's exactly what every kid goes through with every bump in the night.

Not only was it well written, the imagery was frankly vivid, and wonderful. I could do drawings about it was so good. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 21, 2006 @ 07:51am
Sugar was just a kind of laugh-at-myself kind of thing. I used to be real scared of the dark, and I've wanted to try and write a funny poem for a while. I'm glad you like it.

The Emergency Room Requiem is... I dunno. I've been to the hospital recently a few times for tests, as well as to visit mom. She was in for a few days. My reasons for going are starkly different from hers. I guess it was just a... meditation on the fact that I may end up spending a lot more time in one a little later in life.



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