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Mornie Utulie, Mornie Alantie

Posted by: Deadside Dreams Mon Jun 05, 2006 @ 10:06pm

I'm goddamned monumentagious.
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I want to mix our blood and put it in the ground
So you can never leave...

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Commented on: Mon Jun 05, 2006 @ 10:12pm


	I didn't read all of it, don't have time right now sweatdrop But what I did read was very.. dark, it's very descriptive, I like that! Might get back here in a few days and read all of it =) Keep it up!

Commented on: Tue Jun 06, 2006 @ 01:45am


	It's dark, I'll say that, and this one ran much smoother. My personal opinion-I would have put more raw description of the ongoings inside his mind when it came to the suicide. A little description of all the faces and the colors of all the eyes, maybe a little more agrony to really bring the page to turn.

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Commented on: Wed Jun 07, 2006 @ 09:58pm

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