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The Darkest Darkness
Infection
Infection
Love your brothers with disdain,
Strike in them your blackened pain;
Take away their heart and fire,
Build off your weakened desire.

Suck the marrow of mind and soul,
Mold the power that digs your hole.
Cultivate the demons of our domain
When you hurt from those gone sane.

Assault their open wounds as a test,
Sacrifice all impulses and earned rest.
Dump in their scars unbound hell,
Mediate the pulsing brains that melt.

Drown them in pitiless sorrow and grief,
Drink from every sin you can sink your teeth,
Rein unfermented armies which fear conjures,
Torture them in infinite blind horror,

Rip apart the entrails they hastily left,
Teach them the rigors of dealing death,
Bleed in their mouths with every contingent,
And

Desecrate their existence with your infection!






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OMG i Eat Plastic
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 14, 2008 @ 04:35am
eek what the....
that was creepy... eek
and disturbing... eek


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 14, 2008 @ 05:06am
I agree with Ethan!!
You are one scary dude!!!



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General Zero X
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 14, 2008 @ 05:08am
I'm sorry guys emo But I did warn you about my dark mind emo


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 14, 2008 @ 06:46am
yeah i guess your right.....but still......
where do you think like that!?!?!



OMG i Eat Plastic
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General Zero X
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 15, 2008 @ 04:14am
You learn all that when you are unhappy and misunderstood for so long... eventually you learn to control the thoughts and structure them into something like that. Eventually you are condemned to having to leak them into the physical world: a place they do not belong.


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 16, 2008 @ 03:06am
oh my gosh i loveeee this one soo much! ;]



xxM I A N D Axx
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 16, 2008 @ 06:19am
Thank you. I'm glad I do some good work


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 18, 2008 @ 05:32pm
nice i like it



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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 13, 2008 @ 08:06am
It *is* dark but I didn't find it creepy or disturbed or anything.

It seemed more like a commentary on other people than an insight into how your mind works.


commentCommented on: Thu Nov 13, 2008 @ 12:47pm
Some people don't like the whole part about riping apart entrails lol
eek How? It's about hate...



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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 24, 2009 @ 03:34pm
that is an amazing poem. so beautiful in a really awkward way. beautiful in a way that would disgust most people. not me. amazing


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