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Nothing But Breathless Another poem I wrote: Upon the window of my heart I can't help but watch the rain fall. Every drop and glimmer a part; A part that keeps me from standing tall. All that matters is what's on my fingertips. You came at the first drop of pain, so please Be the one to feel everything from my lips And keep the blood off our knees. I scream every moment I cannot reach, I restrain every restless thought to come, I feel a pull for you that I cannot teach And I'll drown in your image before I'm done. I love the world in your eyes no matter the day, For I know what we feel can only be true And I open my heart without the slightest delay Because at every glimmer I think of you. A friend wanted me to write a romantic poem to understand what a person could feel when they like someone and what its like for a guy to write a poem to a girl. She asked me something like "If you wrote a poem to a girl you like what would it say?" So this is one of my many possible answers. It can always vary from the girl and probably will but for the time being please enjoy this one!! 4laugh Thank you for asking me to write this Joanne

Posted by: General Zero X Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 03:47am

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 05:05pm


	Sobs Your poem brought tears to my eyes..no joke.

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 07:28pm


	crying I'm sorry!!! hugs

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 07:32pm


	Don't be. I loved it so much that I cried!!! It is so beautiful.. heart

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 07:33pm


	heart heart heart I'm glad you know how to relate to my work so well!!! heart heart heart

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 07:41pm


	Its weird but I really can relate to it.

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 07:47pm


	Go figure eh? lol Its amazing stuff right there!! That would be so cool to get a romance poem from a girl...

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 07:56pm


	It would be great to get a poem from a guy...thinks In third grade Tony wrote me... "Violets are red Roses are blue I really like you, Do you like me too?" Thats not really what I had in mind.. sweatdrop

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 07:59pm


	That's actually kinda funny lol But yeah. I can bring one for you the day I smuggle myself to Texas

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 08:14pm


	I would love that!!! 4laugh I'd write you one but I'm not much of a poet...

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 08:25pm


	I'd smuggle myself cause I'd probably be there a long time and I don't want to have to take my drivers test again or get my truck re-inspected. And I could always say I was kidnapped so the girls here won't think I am running away from them! Perfect plan!

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 08:44pm


	rofl rofl rofl Your gonna break their hearts!!!

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 08:56pm


	ill sya its sad but i didnt read it. its too long whines but your other poems are all good so ima guessin this is too!

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 09:06pm


	They'll get over it... Like I said "having more than one girl liking you at the same time is hell" There is so much drama where I live... I'm surprised I haven't gotten raped yet... Dude you should read it!!

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 09:19pm


	Do you think that they'd be jealous if they knew how much you talk to me and about how many heart you send me? blaugh

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 09:20pm


	They already have gotten jealous xp

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:09pm


	giggles How funny.

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:14pm


	both of the already had a huge bitching match about me knowing you... one is of course caitlin rolleyes

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:21pm


	I feel special. I am sorry for all the chaos though... doesn't feel sorry What they say about me?

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:28pm


	I don't know. That would be great if they told me though. I get tired of her f*ing around thinking she right... Every time a problem pops up she is always wrong. You think she would have learned by now not to f* with me or my friends.

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:36pm


	Cimone is always teasing me about you... I don't really know why. neutral

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:42pm


	I don't know why she would be doing that either... I didn't do anything...

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:46pm


	Cimone has problems. Hey what does friction mean?

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:48pm


	Stuff rubbing up against each other... why?

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:56pm


	Not that type of friction. Let me use it in a sentence. There was definitely friction between the teacher and the students dad.

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 10:59pm


	Oh... I thought Cimone used that when she was teasing you about me!!! blaugh It could mean a dissension or conflict between people

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 11:02pm


	Well I don't know but she said that there was friction between you and I. I'm gonna ask her what it means. texts Cimone

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 11:07pm


	..... I think I know but I'll wait to hear what she says lol

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 11:10pm


	What do you think it means?

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 11:18pm


	Considering how the word popped in her head for her to use I would say it means there is a "spark." friction creates heat, or fire, or sparks. That heat in turn is a connotation for passion...

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 11:23pm


	eek She said it means a passionate connection.. You guessed right.

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Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 11:27pm


	Booya!!! Damn I'm good!!! blaugh Hm... She loves talking about your love life doesn't she?

Commented on: Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 11:33pm


	Its her favorite thing to do.. rolleyes

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Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 12:32am


	xd yeah. I know how that is... kinda. Don't let it bother you.

Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 01:37am


	I don't. I do get mad at her sometimes for it though. Specially when she's wrong and is being a betch about it.

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Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 01:42am


	Like when she laughs hysterically because of something you sent someone and you end up pushing her out of her chair....

Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 01:55am


	Thats one example...

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Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 01:57am


	lol yeah. When my parents tease me about girls they are perverted... xp

Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 03:05am


	blaugh Really? What type of stuff do they say?

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Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 03:08am


	coughs a lot Some weird a** stuff... They talk about underwear and sex and touchy stuff and just... ew....

Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 05:00am


	TMI! ima joining in for a min!! and now ima gone! like a ninja on steroids/crack!!

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Commented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 02:48pm


	Thats so funny!!! rofl

Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 12:37am


	My parents are weird emo They think I will have sex before marriage... They don't believe in me!!! scream lol

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Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 12:39am


	their bad parents!!! >=O

Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 12:44am


	I think they are trying to be too realistic... My sis even found a thong in Victoria's secret and showed it to me yelling Christina's name xp

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Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 04:18pm


	blaugh Thats hilarious!!!!

Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 05:22pm


	Christina hates thongs but I was surprised when she said she only wanted it cause it had peace signs on it sweatdrop when you think you know someone they change lol

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Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 06:07pm


	I think I have one but I've never worn it. It looks very uncomfortable... sweatdrop

Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 07:10pm


	I bet it would be... I hear there is a theory behind some girls liking thongs xp

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Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 07:47pm


	That it makes them feel sexy?

Commented on: Sat Aug 02, 2008 @ 07:49pm


	Yeah.... Wouldn't make me feel sexy. Uncomfortable maybe but they are probably worse than boxers.

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