The dance of the dead.

• Artist: death-is-no-more
• Description: It's a quick little poem that came to mind,
  but nothing says i love you like suicide
  although if they really thought about it
  it really is a shame that people take there lives just for a simple feeling.
• Date: 09/17/2011
• Tags: dance dead

Nothing says i love you like a cocktail off pills,
The dance of the dead and the halloween thrills.
The party’s all night,
The drunk loving ways.
The summer has nothing to give us these days,
There is nothing left for these cold hearless ways.
As the lovers have fallen with nothing to say,
But holding there hands for the time to come.
I love you,
They whisper to each other.
As forever they are together,
Threw all the love and now with the hate.
As forever they lay in the dark open flames.
Goodnight,
From Death

Comments

[death-is-no-more]

sorry it was a miss spelling ment heartless
i thought i got rid of all the spelling mistakes lol sorry and thanks ^_^

[Yeux Noisette]

I really like it, just one question. At the end of line six the "hearless" seems a bit out of place. Am I just reading that wrong?
Other wise I really like the mood as well as beat and rhyme.