When

• Artist: VI_Mistress_Xion_IV
• Description: I came up with this because of my life. My life story is to detailed to say so id rather not say anything but this poem. Plz feel free to comment on how ******** up i am in my head xD jk but coment it if u like ^^
• Date: 04/09/2011
• Tags: bloodflowing coldhearts deadwishes

Leave me lifeless on the floor
Just do it
Bloodloss i dont think so
My hearts gone cold, Ive blocked everyone away
SAVE ME PLZ!
U left me to die
Thanks!
U came back one winter and promised to take care of me...to hold me...love me...
All lies!
Our hopes and wishes died when u left me for dead...
U where mine all mine...then....
Dead wishes?....Bloodloss?....Cold hearts?
Hah! Im worthless?
Yeah...right
My blood is as black as ur heart...my dear mother...
Ive hated u forever now
No one will ever ove u back
Help?
No!
Hate.....Love.....War....Blood......Cold hearts......Alone
U....u!
Me? No u!
Go away and leave me be.
I guess im just a doll now no master no strings just on the shelf
Im dead....nothing....worthless....
I should die...u think so to huh?
I knew it!

Comments

[Raziel Moonfire]

You should never use shortened words in a piece of writing. I know it saves time, but with writing, it makes you look like you have no intelligence.