Rejection

• Artist: Black Ski
• Description: The song is currently unfinished. However, I was working on it one night and almost finished the song until, I accidentally pasted something over it. And every data was lost. I brought it back by memory. My memory fails. This is what I have left now... :[
  
  They're somewhat true feelings...
  
  And I tried not to use the word 'I' and 'you'. I guess I failed miserably?
• Date: 09/03/2010
• Tags: rejection love hate loneliness itoldyouso

The sun shines through my window
In my dark, empty room
Wondering who’s the foe
Probably just someone that can’t be assume (can’t assume)

Thirsting for a second chance

How something so beautiful (so beautiful)
Can hurt so much
(Thorns of its beauty)
Pierce through my soul
The pain aches inside my chest (inside my chest)

The memories forever lie deep (inside)
The pain will not recede

All this never happened
Because it never meant anything to you
It never happened (never)
It never existed (ever)

Now thy lie down
Motionlessly breathing (quickly)
Motionlessly bleeding (inside)
Those memories will never fade
From my soul

Thy tire from crying endlessly
Wanting to make it go all away
Needless to say
Have always been waiting…

Letting it be another regret
Something thy cannot forget (always)

Comments

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

you lost most of it? that's a pain......

well, if you're not finished, u should withdraw this one and take some time to remember the rest of what you've written in this piece....

other than that, this is a good piece of writing you made! 5/5 wink