Imaginary Vultures

• Artist: ChiquitaChacon
• Description:
• Date: 06/28/2010
• Tags: imaginary vultures hurt depression dead

Feel so empty
Feel so dead
Drowning in my river of tears
In this bed

Imaginary Vultures
Will now eat what I have kept
They will eat my dead soul
Until there is nothing left

I'm getting buried alive
By depression
My heart is so hurt
This is my least session

Imaginary Vultures
Will soon eat me gone
Because I am dead
And I just can't move on..

Comments

[Melvin Flakes]

i dont like the last stanza but the rest ok 4

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

very good! keep it up! 5 stars! smile

[Coolyei]

Hah. I commented your other writing. I think this one is better, personally! 5/5!