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love sucks,
one smile ain't enough,
and aftermath just f u c ks,
though i know i'm not much.
love is s h it,
when your a boy's one hit,
where the hell is my profit?
now my a** is really lit.
love isn't love,
i know i'll just get dumped,
every time i get attached,
you pull back s**t-fast.
love will never work for me,
do you know what you've caused me to be?
shut up,
make my wounds greater,
i know its coming sooner or later.
- by Mc muffiner |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/14/2009 |
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Comments (3 Comments)
- fruit4you - 09/29/2014
- Love the attitude of the poem. It is very emotional. Personally it is a little too brash for me, but that's just my taste. I feel this is more of an angry rant with a rhyme scheme. I indeed love your anger in it, but wish you presented it better.
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- Mc muffiner - 07/14/2009
- thank you so much! people like you are what makes it easy to write.
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- xperfect circlex - 07/14/2009
- Your amazing.
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