Metaphysical Sonnet 3

• Artist: Suzumebachi Neyo
• Description: I like to write sonnets in Spencerian Style writing, fourteen lines rhyming abab with a rhyming couplet at the end
• Date: 10/06/2009
• Tags: metaphysical sonnet

I sailed accross the ocean blue
Fighting every storm to come my way
And on the other side I should find you
Standing at the shore of the bay

Somehow I knew you would be there
And somehow you knew I would be soon
Together at last; a perfect pair
Finally we meet under the glowing moon

And when our lips did touch
Standing there upon the shore
I'd found what I had missed so much
You were exactly what I was looking for

Together at last; you and me
Together forever; now and for eternity

Comments

[SiciIienne]

"I broke my index finger from repeatedly pressing 5 stars." <-- That, I have to agree with. ^^

[Cody Infamous V2]

...Is there anything you can't do? D:

[UltimateImpact V2]

I broke my index finger from repatedly pressing 5 Stars.

[Flameing Latex]

5out of 5 me boyo ^^

[Beau-sama]

I didnt knew that you where a poet Neyo
Lucky Kigi ^^
5*

[Iveen]

Too cute! <333

[KanamiTenjo]

Very lovely! 5/5