Failures

• Artist: XdarkAZNshadowX
• Description: Okay, I had to make this one poem thingy for school about perseverance. So, i just made this... Please tell me if its good!
• Date: 09/04/2009
• Tags: failures

The failures I hear,
Are all mine,
Coming through my ear,
Spoken in disgust.
I keep trying,
Over and over again.
And I keep failing,
Over and over again.

To see a failure from me,
Is a normal thing.
I keep trying to get a “C”,
But I can’t even get a “D”.

I keep trying to pass,
But all I do is fail.
I always do my best,
But it is never good enough.

I will keep trying,
Harder and harder and harder,
I will not show weakness by crying,
And I won’t give up until I pass.

Comments

[Amii-Amiri]

A okay! But if you want to get a better grade you sould really set up a real pattern. I noticed that your curent pattern is A,B,A,C, and I think you should change that to ABAB. <3