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M-oments of love
O-verwhelmiing love she gives
T-ender,affectionate &caring
H-appy for our success
E-ver forgiving,understanding
R-eady to sacrifice always
- Title: MOTHER
- Artist: jsky_high
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Description:
this is my first poem ever made i made it for my mom
though...... - Date: 07/04/2009
- Tags: mother
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- Boxing Bella - 07/05/2009
- I don't know much about poetry, but there doesn't seem to be any rhythm to it. There are a few spelling errors here and there by the way, but mostly with spacing.
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- pandoraLKLK - 07/04/2009
- That's really sweet smile
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- yasmin123ofsteal - 07/04/2009
- i oove it ecpially sice i don't hae a mom
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- Letitbo - 07/04/2009
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notice how its only MOMENTS. smile 4/5
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