My sickness

• Artist: kamahaazi
• Description: I wrote this song for Rancid Cabbage, my metal band. Please comment.
• Date: 07/01/2009
• Tags: sickness rancid cabbage song lyrics

Let the sound fill your veins.
Just a quick fix and slow release.
Take the cure and savor the taste.
Heartbeat slowed and pain subsides.

Glimpse into madness.
Thrown into hell.
A kill without reason.
An exchange of eyes,
leads to great suprise.
This is my life.
This is my deathly end.
This is my sickness.

Let the music grasp your ear.
Rid of truth and full of lies.
Make it pure and make it real.
It's the pleasure in dying.

Glimpse into madness.
Thrown into hell.
A kill without reason.
An exchange of eyes,
leads to great suprise.
This is my life.
This is my deathly end.
This is my sickness.

Knives and dying and eyes and crying,
Make me sick.
Pain and torture and blood and darkness,
Make me sick.
Make me sick.
Hate and killing and fire and thrilling,
Make me sick.
Crimes and gallows and rules and power.
Make me sick.
Make me sick.

Glimpse into madness.
Thrown into hell.
A kill without reason.
An exchange of eyes,
leads to great suprise.
This is my life.
This is my deathly end.
This is my sickness.

Glimpse into madness.
Thrown into hell.
A kill without reason.
An exchange of eyes,
leads to great suprise.
This is my life.
This is my deathly end.
This is my reason.

Comments

[Thee Awesome Possum]

These lyrics are fairly well written. The only thing I find slightly difficult to maybe grasp, I'm not sure that's even the right words I'm looking for. The lyrics jump, they don't stay focused. That is the only thing I think could be improved. Well written over all.