flower petals

• Artist: YAMMYukooii
• Description: i was imaging a place and got really creative and wrote a poem. >.<
• Date: 06/28/2009
• Tags: flower petals

Flower Petals

Dropping in the water,
one by one it goes.
Each one special,
in it's unique ways.
Each one floating,
like an angel in the sea.
Off it goes in different ways,
you'll just see.

Comments

[WorIds]

I like it,it's short,but it's nice.And it flows better than my poetry,too =3. All of mine has a weird beat to it.But that's what I'm known for.I'd love you to check some of it out ^_^

[YAMMYukooii]

thanks!!! this is one of my favorites!!!

[l Bell l]

I loved the imagery in this poem.
It's like I could almost see it.
Although I wish the poem could have been alittle longer,
haha, I guess I really can't say that.
Mine are just super uber long.
Simply Yours,
Bell