Finding an exit

• Artist: cutiewitabody2
• Description: This is about when I fell in love with this guy and I tried so hard to run away from him because I thought he was my problem but then I relized he was my solution and I really needed him.
• Date: 06/18/2009
• Tags: finding exit love

I stand alone in the dark
Looking for a place of my own
I push through the darkness
search for the light
I call out to you
but i get no reply
I can't let you go
I cant even forget the memories
I find door but its locked
I find a window but it wont shadder
I find a whole but i don't fit
I find you and i stay put
I dont need to escape
because I already found the exit
I found you
I ran away from you once
but got stuck in this hell
Now i found an exit
but its you
Not a door
Not a window
Or a whole
You are my exit
my only light
So i find the door
which you stand behind
It is not locked
Im free but i still hold your hand
I will never let go of this guy I love again

Comments

[Destiny-Reaper]

I like it, except there was a lot of grammer mistakes, as well as typos.

[IIam brokenII]

hi i liked it bye im changing

[XxNon_Stop_DreamerxX]

aaaw that's 1 of my favorite poems u wrote i yor journal bree! I love it! i remember this poem too!

[Alucard_The_Fallen_Angel]

bree thats so sweet 5/5