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5/19/09 “Moment” By: Brandon McLemore
Cold where I stand, fallen on lover’s land
Bold in my thought, to lay down I was told with kindness brought
Fear found with rest, caress you everywere in this test
Scared when I talk, wanting to do something that was dared but dark
Force into you, taking a step fallowed your course I do
Whisper in so tight, such a soft taste from a kisser brings light
Fill up your wish, rested on me with grace set still with bliss
Care for you in eternity, in your arms bare with clearity
Strife from my worries, you’re my life the beginning of the stories
Dream always of this night, in love it would seem cause it feels alright
Stay with you forever, today with this I’ll leave you never
Fight them off to the death, you in sight takes my breath
Peek through your heart, seek us out this feeling will not part
Deal with pain, feel a vain. No blood stain let flood the lane.
Seep in my core, deep in first its sore
Love this touch, above me in beauty such
With great passion thrust much, in a shy fassion pull the clutch
Cross great seas to reach you, on my knees falling blood mourning dew
Alone for you in stone for you
Kill for you thrill for you
Fall in you, crawl to you. Only for you, lonely without you.
You invade me with your emotions coursing through my bloodstream. Cries no more my baby girl, sighs and torn my mind in a twirl. Holding on tightly and folding up steadly. Soft gentlness in you lost happyness. Bringing it out with words, finding this out were alined by chords. Far in the stars there is a part of me that dies. You bring forth from the dead these emotions deep within my soul.
- by Edge Bjorn |
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- | Submitted on 05/19/2009 |
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- Title: Moment
- Artist: Edge Bjorn
- Description: Just another one of my emotional poems.....injoy
- Date: 05/19/2009
- Tags: moment
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Tiej - 05/19/2009
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thou i admire the length of the poem.... i have to say that the content it sloppy
sorry to sound critical in advance...
alot of unnecessary phrasing that did not really address to the theme of the poem ... looks like they were just added there cause the words in tat phrase might appear intellectual...
VERY poor way of using the words alot of words look like you thought of one word and tried to fit a fancier word from the thesaurus... but not fitted to the sentence unfortunately...
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