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Falling apart,
Falling apart,
Falling apart to the cry
Of a broken heart
Red and black roses are marking your grave
What would be a second chance
Lost in a second glance
Never again
Are we going to see the end
You still think it’s all right?
Your hazel eyes can be misleading but
I’ll be the one to laugh when she’s screaming
Oh how torturous lies can be
In faithful conclusion of this spring’s contusion
Well settle the score for free
Just sit back, close your bloodshot eyes
And listen to your own impending demise.
- by BOMBxCHELLE |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/25/2009 |
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- Title: Falling apart
- Artist: BOMBxCHELLE
- Description: I'm working on this for a demo cd. this bit is the verse, (either ending or beginning, i cant decide.) please pm or comment improvements or suggestions, and if you help me enough, ill have you as a co-writer on the album.
- Date: 04/25/2009
- Tags: falling apart
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- sweet black kitty kat - 04/27/2009
- ...it needs to flow more...bit more emotion...little longer...it's really good so far, it just needs a little tweeking...
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