Advice to a Friend...

• Artist: Alvaro The Sinner
• Description: So we were in creative writing and our teacher told us to write a poem that gave practical advice. I decided to write one about something I have to tell all my friends once in awhile.
• Date: 03/28/2009
• Tags: advice friend hope

I want you to listen
Loud and clear
Because I'm about to tell you something
Your mind really needs to hear
Instead of acting all gloomy
Stand up and cheer
For today's a whole new day
Not the same as last year

Be happy you have a dollar
And a pocket full of coin
Instead of being famous
With a clique to join

Be happy for what you have
And that you are still going
Instead of thinking negatively
With what you are missing

Enjoy today
Enjoy tomorrow
Don't worry about the present
Don't worry about the future
Live for the now
Live for tomorrow

Comments

[-Breaking My Promise-]

thats really good

[threeDQT]

ooo we had to do something with a poem Mother to Son wasnt my fav poem tho

[pinkleo2]

whoa! we had 2 do that project 2! We emulated the style from a poem called MOTHER TO SON, what school do you go to? I might know you!

[Mizuburo Inoue]

For a dude who named his Avi "The Sinner", you sure seem like a good guy. it's good-- maybe try following it up with some even deeper thoughts? Something more personal, so it doesn't feel like you're one of those "Advice withought knowing issues" people?

[XXim_a_shexii_pandaXX]

it is good i like it

[maydaymouse]

I like it. It was really good advice, 5/5