So Hurt, So Lost, SO Confused

• Artist: jazzsued
• Description: oops srry every one it was my first time submiting a poem on here lol ummm the first time i did this it was wrong the way i put it in plz do forgive me
• Date: 03/24/2009
• Tags: hurt lost confused feelings life

I feel so hurt....
So lost...
So...
Confuse...
I don't know where to go in life....
My mind is heavy...
Full with strife...
I have such a heavy heart...
Soon to be torn apart...
I had no idea...
Life could be fierce...
Full of death...
A part of me dies with every breath...
So full of pain...
With barely any good to gain...
I feel as if I lost a good friend…
Never ever to see again…
I feel so hurt...
So lost...
So...
Confused...
I just don't know what I should choose...

Comments

[XxCartman_FanxX]

it was okay 4/5

[Xenneh]

The poem is fine, dont over-react xD
Better than others, I'll give you that.
4/5 :>