black in my own coldness

• Artist: 69now1
• Description: confusion and comfort
• Date: 03/02/2009
• Tags: black coldness

what it is is tht ive come to find
searching so long finding nothing
seeing nothin
following nothing before me
i try so hard so hard i really do
i just dont know what it is they want of me
its in this darkness that i have found in the darkness that i lay
these things make sense these things realize my own feeling
my own expression my own.
is that not what one is to want
one is to look for
to eventually find these things
ninja

Comments

[69now1]

its free verse and free feeling sorry if you feel its not to your liking get over it its ones feeling and as this is not my english class im not going to bother to redirect my own personal errors in this format of writing in it is my own and how i feel srry to hear it conflicts your liking

[Saint Sims]

Spelling errors and grammitical IN-precision, I feel this is amateur-ish and I would suggest a more easily understood theme.