Weeping in Silence

• Artist: ms_yun-yun
• Description: This is a poem I created from my own novel. It may be short, but this poem is from the funeral precession of a great ruler. Please, do not copy this without permission from me. Comments and ratings are appreciated. ^^
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: weeping silence

Here, now we gather

At the heels of thunder

Where the graves stand unmarked

And the weeping kingdom cries

Rain of the long-lost storm

Falls in the wind

Our voices stand high

At the time of this mourning

Let not defeat fill our hearts

For then our souls cannot go on.

Comments

[usurutenkochi]

CAITLIN you are so deep. This thing is pretty scary. good job 5/5
Arrabi

[ustho]

Hmm, the tone is quite unique, and i only see some of the way's that it fits the funeral though it's still quite good and understandable. 4/5

[Pickmin123]

pretty good.
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