my savior

• Artist: Luna_luna8
• Description: i love god, so wrote a poem when i first accepted him!
• Date: 09/07/2008
• Tags: savior

when i was young i was scared,
i wasn't sure if he was there.
i go about my ways each day,
i never heard the words he'd say.

the feeling everyone has,
the feeling i long to have.
i wanted him to reach out to me,
i wanted to hear the words he speaks.

i ran inside and cried to him,
dear lord my God, please take me in.
from that day on i felt so free,
to do whatever i may please.

the weight that layed within my heart,
no longer weighs inside me.
i love my God so very much,
he is the meaning of everthing.

thank you God, our lord for each day,
we thank your for our blessings.
so please forgive us for all our sins,
for without you, we are nothing.

-Amen-

Comments

[xxSora1144]

nicely written biggrin

[Luna_luna8]

omg ya thats how i feel and look at things!
thank you so much! >.<

[Draclaria]

I love your poem! You go girl! If someone does not like the concept of God, than they do not have to read this! If they do, than that is their own choice. It is a wonderful poem. It is also true. Once you give yourself up to God, than you feel as free as a bird, if not better! He lifts your burdens, troubles, and everything else.And, for the record, if you just look around you, you can see God. Nothing of science could have turned a burning ball of lava or whatever into a lush plannet like this

[Luna_luna8]

thanks ur amazing sribumi! >.<

[AquaBless]

I love ur poem^^.
To SilentValentine16
We have our own perception on life n believe. That doesnt mean it gave u right to say smtg like that. Respect others if u want to be respected. I know that no one like to be judge abt their belief. If that make someone happy n doesnt harm anyone, so let it be.

[Xana Xeya]

Simply awesome. 5/5

[Pure_Dove]

Its cute i enjoy it very much! =D
Check my poem out k?
Its called Solitary lovers