silent fall

• Artist: carlisle cullen lover
• Description: if you don't get it then please send me a pm or comment on my profile.
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: love anger

I am falling into a silent rage,
as you shake and rattle my cage.

you may not belive that i will stike,
but you are wrong and i know that is not some thing that you like.

you may try to calm this savage beast,
but tonight upon your blood i shall feast.

and soon the last words you will ever hear,
will be "my love ,do not have any fear."

Comments

[Omen Naoki]

i likes it and can understands it. 5/5
also, not meaning to be "that guy" but the third line ends with "stike," shouldnt it be "strike?"

[Ryan Russell]

I understood all but the last line...Is it a reference to a book or movie, perhaps? :sigh:
I liked it though and could understand the rest! 5/5

[i-Maria-i]

oopppps i spelt poems wrong sad

[i-Maria-i]

it is awesome u should like write peoms for kids also u get a 50000/5

[HeartScribblez]

Man that is AWESOME! 5/5 Such... intensity! biggrin

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