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Blood drips,
from the open wound upon her wrist.
Contagious,
is what every scar screams.
Contagious,
it's what every cut means.
Studying the wound,
comprehending it's depth.....
The story begins...
She can explain the knife,
and the reason behind the slice.
It all started,
when she woke up,
with a hole in her chest.
The pain was beginning to consume her whole,
so she temporarily lost control.
It was hard to breathe,
and hard to speak,
painful to try,
yet easy to lie.
Taking hits off the surface,
it was so hard to sleep.
She cried out to her heart,
"oh! please just stop!"
Sobbing in her room uncontrollably,
clouded by unreasoning gloom.
This is her story,
her story of depression.
It lasted a whole two years,
before her mom finally noticed something suicidally weird....
- by TiffanyTrippout |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: Her Depression Story
- Artist: TiffanyTrippout
- Description: A poetic story about a girls diagnosed depression.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: depression story mddmajordepressiondisorder
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxMu5iclovin_band_g33KxX - 09/15/2010
- i loved it. exactly what happened to me. you should definately keep writing. <3
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- SeeingGuardianWolf - 04/19/2009
- it made me feel like me, yet so disturbing, kind of like my poems u should check out the one i wrote called"where" and maybe a few others that i wrote, i loved urs, keep on writing
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 12/30/2008
- A girl cutting herself in the midst of depression. My favorite part is the originality.
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- Nikki4815 - 12/07/2008
- I like it. 4/5. Rate back? My best entry is called "Unspoken Message" and I recently submitted "Lost in the World"
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- Villain Vanilla - 12/06/2008
- Why did you start rhyming it randomly in the middle?
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