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Missing you
Seeing you everywhere I go
Watching you
Living your life alone
Remembering how things used to be
And that empty feeling inside me
It tears me apart
Worrying, wondering
Tell me your thoughts
Those unreadable eyes
Hurt me so deep
And that’s when I knew that
We were never to be
And once again, I remember
The feeling of
Your heartbeat so strong
Beating against me
That look in your eyes
When you told me you loved me
And now that’s all gone
That’s all that I had
You’ve left me with nothing
So barren, so dead
And now, once again
I catch you alone
Seeing you once more
As I once have done
Loving you as I did
In days long gone by
And in your eyes also
I see it once more
That flickering fire
Of those days before
The longing, the memories
I know we both feel
Yet still they seem so very
Far away, surreal.
But for this last little moment
I want you with me
To see you, to love you
To set myself free
To be there with you
To read those dark eyes
And see once again
Those days passing by
And now its all over
I know that its gone
Those happy old days
Those times long gone
But now I finally know that
Its time to move on
Say good bye to the past
And keep living on
Face the new music
Learn the new songs
But I’ll love you forever
For those days long gone...

- Title: Days Long Gone
- Artist: Lunarasea
- Description: A sort of poem/song hybrid. ^^ I was feeling emo, so...
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: days long gone
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Pikku Prinssi - 11/28/2008
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It's good, better than some of the other stuff I've seen.
But does poetry/songwriting always have to be so depressing?
Not once have I seen something that hasn't made me want to go kill myself (because of the meaning AND writing style x_x). Sheesh. Not that it's just you, (i'm kinda ranting on you, sorry), but it seems like people only write sad, depressing things. I want to be happy ;-; - Report As Spam
- pet0match - 11/27/2008
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Very great, you can hear the emotion through your words
I always say that once you can get your audience can feel the same way that you did when you wrote the poems it's the mark of something great! - Report As Spam
- Lunarasea - 11/26/2008
- =D thanks so much.
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- Yunas broken heart - 11/26/2008
- It's nice, I can't write like this *Cries in corner* You're very good at this!
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