Ayone

• Artist: Kei Tsukuda
• Description: A poem i wrote about an anime character i made up. Her names Ayone and she's a Draconian. A human who is born with a special dragon that is her guardian. She's a character whose lost her family and home, with the only who she's able to trust is her Dragon.
  
  would like people's opinions on the poem so please leave lots of comments! :)
• Date: 11/22/2008
• Tags: ayone

This girl so Alone
This girl so Annoyed
Whispering her sad Tone
Her home was Destroyed
During this sad Time
You'll hear of her Crime
The Crime that Destroyed All
In the Midst of Fall

Comments

[LuvHayato]

You're poem is very well written. Short and to the Point

[KiraKiraWelcomeToDEATH]

omgies so sad
what didn't i read this befor? didn't you make me read it befor?
it still really good

[Pondy Is The Coolest]

I like It's simplicity. It describes the feelings of the character completely, and it has a really nice tone to it, good job ^^