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Love is like a thin line of thread,
so easy to break,
so easy to mend,
it wraps around people with souls combined,
but can be easily broken by a small denial,
though it can be mended by time and effort,
some don't find it necessary,
so they live alone,
wishing they had tried,
in the end,
when,
the two who love are together,
that thread gets stronger,
strengthening in time forever.
- by Nod Fanatic |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: Nod Fanatic
- Description: the title is the discription
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: love
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- Thorn Of The Sky - 01/17/2009
- I likes 5/5
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- Himeona - 10/19/2008
- heehee! not bad at all!
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- Chayce West - 10/19/2008
- Not bad...but a little cliche-ish. It needs more spark.
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- virtuoso of righteousness - 10/19/2008
- very good... i liked it
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- -- classic criminal - 10/19/2008
- I like it ^^
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- Nod Fanatic - 10/19/2008
- thanks for noticing....
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- songwriterscramp - 10/19/2008
- Well, it's good except for the spelling mistakes.
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