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Hear me whisper
Watch me sleep
See me struggle
As I leap
You did not hear me
You did not care
All you did
Was sit and stare
Now I'm falling
To my death
As I take
My last breath
No need to care
No need to cry
Just watch me fall
As I die.
- by Eternal_Ecplise |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/05/2008 |
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- Title: My Last Words
- Artist: Eternal_Ecplise
- Description: A poem about a girl who doesn't want to live anymore, so she ends her life.
- Date: 10/05/2008
- Tags: last words
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Mortuus-Silentium - 10/05/2008
- smile xD i wish u were u were in our poetry club...urs would kick every bodies poems
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- Lynxikat - 10/05/2008
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It's so....sad.... sad
But I know stuff like this happens. - Report As Spam
- Eternal_Ecplise - 10/05/2008
- thanks guys!!!! =)
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- Xx-FallenGuardianAngel-xX - 10/05/2008
- Wow, thats amazing. It kinda reminds me of the pain I have to live through everyday bcuz I like this boy, but he doesn't like me back and I feel as tho I he wouldn't care if I...died... Nice Job!
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- cutiepiediva95 - 10/05/2008
- Amazing. Where it says "My last breath" I think you should change it to "My final breath". It sounds fine the way it is but when I read it I think final would keep the flow/rhythm of the poem.
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- DIRTYFLIRTY78 - 10/05/2008
- very tragic no one cares how true is that nice poem but sad for sure
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- Koterre - 10/05/2008
- Wow. Powerful. Make me me wish I could help her. I know what it feels like to be left behind.
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