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Happy this time until then
she said, sun-squint leaning still, the shining stream
--in mind's eye the overarching theme revealed
a catapult and diverse thrills.
How to simplify...
feed ducks with bread?
He listened
once more softly,
turning in his mind
the coward flesh--
then casting out a small hook
made of clay
asked, simply happy
this time until when?
- Title: Happy This Time Until Then
- Artist: LoveRaRa1
- Description: Poem
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: happy time until then
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Ardens - 01/08/2009
- Wow! That's fantastic, I really like the use of imagery. It also seems to follow the pattern of thought in its irregularity of structure and rhythm.
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